Wed 28 Oct 2009
I am trying to come up with tagline for a beauty salon that caters for men and women (In Europe a ‘beauty salon’ provides services such as hair removal, facials, massages etc rather than hair styling). What do you think of: Make your body smile -or- Let your body smile
Jay’s Answer: “Make/Let Your Body Smile” doesn’t work for me because after hearing “Bodalicious”, I don’t know what your business is. After hearing the tagline, I still don’t. Therefore, the tagline needs to help explain a key benefit of your business.
- A Beauty Salon For Men And Women (boring but clear)
- A Beauty Salon For Everyone
- The Beauty Salon For Cool Crowd