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Looking For A Tagline For Design Company

So I have a multimedia/design company in the works called BUNCH or BUNCH Media. However, I am having difficulty coming up with a catchy tag line that describes what we are.Some of the tag lines were: Fresh Media, Collective Fresh Media, and Your fresh source for media. It should try to describe that we can deliver new ideas to the customer and it is all types of multimedia that we can deliver. I would really appreciate any ideas.

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Jay’s Answer: It’s assumed that a multimedia/design company will deliver new ideas. To start with, instead of Bunch Media, why not Bunch Multimedia? That’ll tell about your multimedia offerings. Next, who specifically are you hoping to attract? Where are they located? What will make you the “right” choice for them? How do you know? What your prospective clients are looking for is multimedia that attracts new customers (i.e., more than pays for itself), not simply “something fresh”.

Mattress Sales Headline

There is a furniture company, focused in the Northeast, that within the last few years has expanded their mattress selection. They carry all the big “S” brands plus some memory foams. We are trying to come up with some verbiage on an 8X11 display that will draw the customer into the mattress gallery. The sign would be going on vignettes (sofa, loveseat and chair), probably on the end table…any help/suggestions would be much appreciated!

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Jay’s Answer:

  • Getting Sleepy?
  • Put More Excitement In Your Bedroom

Naming Our Park Volunteer Program

I am the marketing manager for a city park department. We are in the middle of a complete reorganization of our volunteer and donation program. As a piece of our launch into new collaborative ways of doing business – focused on more park adoptions and long range partnerships with organizations and businesses – we are updating our branding package including a new name. This is where I need your help!

There are some words that seem to resonate, but I have yet to put them together in a concise way that sings “I’m the one!” We even have a tagline that we like, yet still can’t land on a name: “Connecting People, Places and Open Spaces.” Words we are drawn to include Connect, Team, Network, Action, Stewards, Partnerships, People Powered, and Friends

We have had several lively discussions on our team and have narrowed down the unique personality of our program. And yes, as it turns out … she is a she…

“She is a casual professional who is contagiously enthusiastic and knowledgeable. Her approachable manner inspires her community to connect with each other and the outdoors. She makes you feel good and want more.”

We also named her Sage. In addition to the obvious color association, this name connotes wisdom, a philosophical/spiritual mentor, seasoning (definitely not bland), plants (including native to the region), and magical properties. It directly complements the our division’s tagline – Keeping “city name” Green. We now have the filter “What would Sage do?” to keep us focused and true to our intent.

To further dig into our program’s personality we even envisioned what she would drive:

Hybrid Ford Escape 4WD
– Burgundy color with tan “pleather” interior
– Sporty and stylish but not in-your-face flashy
– Features a tow package and off road tires with a bit of mud on the fenders
– Well maintained, though not spotless
– 54,000 miles
– Equipped with a smart phone, GPS and a rockin’ sound system
– A bumper sticker that reads: I Love My Park
– Trunk filled with: Emergency and first aid kit, a diamond plate tool box filled with things like tools, shovel, vest, cones, measuring wheel, marking paint, rain gear, boots, waders, and a Carhart jacket. A camera and some scraps and garbage leftover from recent events.

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Jay’s Answer: I’m not sure how much you’re using Sage as internally focused exercise or how much you want to share Sage with the public. If the latter, consider:

  • WWSD? (What Would Sage Do?)
  • Color Me Sage
  • I Am Sage

 

Need Help With A Tagline For Realtor In Phoenix

I’m looking for help coming up with a catchy (not cheesy) tagline for my real estate business. I work in Phoenix, AZ and focus on golf course communities. I work with both buyers and sellers so I can’t have it focused on either group. Last name is Daly so I’m trying to bring that into play if possible as well.

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Jay’s Answer:

  • Serving the Golfing Life…Daly.
  • Specializing In Golf Course Communities…Daly.

How to Start Our Event Company?

We are a group of young graduates and we want to start an Event Management company in Mauritius. We will organise receptions of weddings, anniversaries, cocktail parties and other events. We are targeting only high profile people: individuals and corporate. Can you give me some idea about how we can proceed?

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Jay’s Answer: Start with a SWOT (strengths, weaknesses, opportunities, and threats) analysis to see how your proposed company would fit into the existing social “scene” in Mauritius. How would your company be better/different from the existing competition? What groups of people aren’t served (well)?

Next, realize that individuals and corporate clients have very different needs, and therefore you’ll need different marketing to communicate to each group. Better to focus on either individuals or corporate clients (at first) to make it easier to get known for that niche.

Lastly, unless you will also be creating a venue for the parties, introduce yourselves to existing venues that are rented for parties/events by your target audience. Find out their needs, and find out how you can partner with them.

Rebrand Construction Company

I run a small construction / renovation company. We specialize in the higher end of the market. Most of our work comes through referrals, but I’d like to advertise on occasion, to fill in the slower periods. We take care of everything for our clients, design, permit acquisition and of course the construction. I want to convey an image of boutique service. Help me create a new image! Company name… logo image… tagline… suggestions?

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Jay’s Answer: First, why change your name? Presumably you’ve been in business awhile (since most of your work comes from referrals) – why lose the name that people remember you by?

Next, what does “boutique service” mean for your company? What services do you (now) do that you haven’t before? How do you differ from other companies? Design, permits, etc. are the normal way construction companies (at least those I’m familiar with) operate in my area.

Are people paying more for “boutique service”? Rather than focus on the service, focus on the results. Focus on the overjoyed clients who love your work that came in under budget and early. Focus on the energy saving design or award-winning designs.

Name my Zimbabwe Women’s Store

I’m opening up an international store that caters to woman, we got shoes, clothes,hair,skin and beauty products. i need a catchy classy and sexy name. the store is located in Harare Zimbabwe and in Kuala Lumpur Malaysia, but its an online store as well. age range is 18-50+. we have skin care products for all skin types, hair extensions, wigs and weaves, sexy and classy clothes, shoes and accessories, diet pills and solution gels.

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Jay’s Answer: (Aside: Women who are 20 are unlikely to be interested in products that cater to 40 year-olds, and the same’s true for 40 and 60 year-old women. Your age range is too wide to effectively interest “all women between 18-50+”. Furthermore, not everyone will have the same skin needs, hair needs, clothing needs, etc.)

As for a name, it should appeal to prospective customers in your region. If you’re unsure what would appeal – start talking to women in your area and asking them for advice. Here’s a suggestion to also consider: “Internationally Lovely”.

Company Name For A Sports Marketing And Camps

I am a graduate of Physical Education and Sports and currently taking my Masters Degree in the same line. I operated and managed my own swimming camp/clinics for almost 2 years.
Dilemma: I will now take the next step of organizing sports events, along side with multi-sports clinics that will be offered to prestigious schools here in our area. I need a Business Name and a tagline that will showcase what we do.
Services: Organizing of sports events, (fun run, cycling, swimming and the like), Team Building and Multi-sports Camps/Clinics (swimming, volleyball, basketball, badminton, soccer etc).
Client: Christian schools, ages 7 – 18 years old.
Duration: Year-round
Edge: Our competitors only handle sports events management; our group will in additional offer multi-sports clinics/camps.

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Jay’s Answer:

  • Fit Kids: Events & Clinics
  • Sporty Kids
  • Kids That Play Together

 

Diamond Jewelry Business Tagline?

I need a Tagline for diamond jewelry business but we are also launching MLM plans for our customers. So, i need a tagline which not only emphasis on jewelry but also motivate people to join us. Please help with an idea.

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Jay’s Answer: A tagline should revolve not around what you’re offering, but how what you’re offering is of interest to your prospective clientele. For example:

  • Why should people want to join you?
  • Which people?
  • Where are they located in the world?
  • What makes your company better than jewelry companies?
  • Can you prove it?
  • How will you support your MLM customers?

These are just some of the key questions you’ll need to answer to create an on-target tagline.

Catchy Name Needed For Haiti Benefit

We are hosting a Christmas Party to benefit youth leadership development programs in Haiti & are looking for a catchy event name. The evening will include food, music, dancing & a silent auction, & proceeds will support an organization called Nouvelle Vie Youth Corps.

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Jay’s Answer:

  • The Nouvelle Noël Benefit
  • Vivre Pour Noël Benefit